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“How To Position Your Advertising Offer As A Reward””
One of the strongest ways to write a headline for an ad is to position your offer as something the buyer has earned. Something they deserve. A reward. I like the word “entitled”. I even use it in my product demonstrations. We have older people come in my store and look at our vacuum cleaners. A common theme is “We’re getting older. We don’t have that much time left, so we don’t need anything fancy”. I hear that several times a month. So I say “Sir, you’ve been working hard for the last 70 years, am I right? You are entitled to something better”. It’’s really hard to say “No” to something you’re “entitled to”.
Back to ad headlines.
You can start the headline (any headline really) with “They Finally Listened To You!”
Think about that headline. Who are “They”? The same “they” that the reader has blamed for everything bad in their life. Very powerful word. “Finally” means that this product was anticipated. It was something worth waiting for. “Listened To You”. How many people feel they aren’t listened to...that their opinion isn’t valued? Plenty. This is a very strong way to start a headline. You can even use it as a pre-headline. In smaller letters just above the mail headline. Great idea.
How about “Isn’t It About Time Someone……”
This is a conversational way of leading into the headline and it accomplishes plenty. Haven’t you heard this throughout your life; “It’s about time somebody did something about (whatever)” ?
“About time” sounds like the real solution to a vexing problem, doesn't it?
“Isn’t It About Time Someone Gave Us An 8 Pound Vacuum Cleaner That Could Pick Up That Embarrassing Pet hair?”
“Gave Us” is also a key idea. “Sold Us” would kill the sale. “Invented For Us” is better.
But “Gave Us” sounds like a real favor...a present...that you are entitled to….
“An 8 Pound Vacuum Cleaner That Could Pick Up..” gives the reader a clue to what you sell. Even “8 pound vacuum cleaner” is a benefit. “Embarrassing pet hair” defines a common problem...and “Embarrassing” is a nerve word that aggravates the problem of pet hair and makes the problem stronger in the reader’s mind. |